Wednesday, November 14, 2018

Dara and Bella.W writing


Here is me and Bella.W writing piece, what i learnt from this was the difference between Bella and I's working as we had different ideas that contributed to this story, but overall we are both happy with how it turned out. My favourite part about our writing is when Chloe falls in the lambs tails. I think Bella and I both work really well together and both contributed a lot, what I found difficult was not knowing what your partners ideas were for the story. But overall I really enjoyed this
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  1. AnonymousNovember 16, 2018 at 1:51 PM

    Hey there Dara it's Cruz from kaingaroa school. I liked how you explained your reflection and what subjected you where doing with your friend. Maybe next time check you spelling and your punctuation and also I didn't get it at one point other then that it was good bye

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